Nice couplet. However, I would get rid of the period after RAIN so that it is just one sentence:
Watching the rain
Keeps me sane.
You could also remove the capital letter from the word KEEPS or just leave it there, since many poets capitalize the first word of every line anyway. Sometimes I do that, and sometimes I don't.
Keep writing.
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Nice couplet. However, I would get rid of the period after RAIN so that it is just one sentence: Watching the rain Keeps me sane. You could also remove the capital letter from the word KEEPS or just leave it there, since many poets capitalize the first word of every line anyway. Sometimes I do that, and sometimes I don't. Keep writing.