Neelam Dadhwal


Rain breeze


rain breeze...
a spider climbs out
of its web

Submitted: Friday, June 13, 2014

Topic of this poem: nature

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  • Rookie - 168 Points Timothy Caffery (6/13/2014 10:08:00 AM)

    Oh, snap! This is reminiscent of the very first poem I ever wrote. But where my was dreary, this is vibrant and bright. I like it, for what it is. It almost makes we smell the rain. (Report) Reply

    Rookie - 169 Points Neelam Dadhwal (6/14/2014 10:11:00 PM)

    Thanks Timothy, expressions are of kind. Will love to read yours too.

    Rookie - 169 Points Neelam Dadhwal (6/14/2014 10:07:00 PM)

    Thanks Timothy. Expressions are of type. Would like to read yours too.

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