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Ali Sabry

(11/8/1988 / Iraq - Baghdad / Kurdish From Kurdistan Region Of Iraq)

RAIN Please Do Not Stop


RAIN please do not stop

Rain please do not stop, shower us from sins
Shower us with BARAKAT and bring us peace

Rain, you were bringing a smile to our prophet
I will keep stand under you with all of sophisticate

You are the only one can change the beauty of nature
I will always keep mention you from each corner

You were being faithful to me
You were the one did cry for me

I understand you spent you tears all around the world
Its for sake of human lives and for sake of food

The true love come from you
I promise i will always be faithful and remembering you

Hope YOU like it (Rain)

Submitted: Sunday, June 16, 2013
Edited: Tuesday, July 30, 2013

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  • Alookh (matin) (9/18/2013 6:02:00 AM)

    WOoooooooooooow! ! ! ! this one is my favorite poem from ur works! ! ! lovely, really lovely ma dear frnd! ! ! ! u are full of pure sentiment.....all the sentenses were very nice.....i love Rain too.....i love showering rain with thunder! ! ! ....i love it....and every time its showering i want to cry loudly with rain.....i love it and also ur poem! ...i live in the north of Iran here we have a lot of rain and......thanks God for this much BARAKAT! (Report) Reply

  • Dinesh Nair (6/18/2013 9:10:00 AM)

    Good hope has been guiding you..

    Oh rain, now spread your wings to Somalia and Ethiopia and let the poets of those lands thank you.

    A good poem Ali Sabry... You are made my friend. (Report) Reply

  • Survi Sharma (6/16/2013 11:17:00 AM)

    nicely penned
    rhythmic expansion is highly valued and the tempo of the poem is well maintaine
    great write
    liked it (Report) Reply

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