Ali Sabry

Rookie - 152 Points (11/8/1988 / Iraq - Baghdad)

- - Rain Please Don'T Stop- - - Poem by Ali Sabry

RAIN please do not stop

Rain please do not stop, shower us from sins
Shower us with BARAKAT and bring us peace

Rain, you were bringing a smile to our prophet
I will keep stand under you with all of sophisticate

You are the only one can change the beauty of nature
I will always keep mention you from each corner

You were being faithful to me
You were the one did cry for me

I understand you spent you tears all around the world
Its for sake of human lives and for sake of food

The true love come from you
I promise i will always be faithful and remembering you

Hope YOU like it (Rain)


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Comments about - - Rain Please Don'T Stop- - by Ali Sabry

  • Veteran Poet - 1,301 Points Jaishree Nair (4/12/2015 9:01:00 PM)

    A nice metamorphic poem.apart from a few grammar mistakes the lines are enjoyable. Thanks for sharing (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 176 Points Nathan Coppedge (5/31/2014 10:32:00 PM)

    There is feeling in this poem, even if the English is not perfect.

    Write or don't write, but don't forget to live. I suspect, however, from your poems, that you find life in the process of writing. So that's a good thing. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 6,634 Points Salini Nair (2/18/2014 1:36:00 AM)

    liked it.what you wrote here is really true (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 294 Points Daniel Y. (2/9/2014 4:51:00 PM)

    A few grammar errors- not important. The emotion is powerful. An honest prayer. I really enjoyed it. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 1 Points Doris Cornago (12/3/2013 10:36:00 AM)

    This poem is very good - thank you. I can feel your affection here and less of the sorrow caused by a woman. Keep making poems, Ali Sabry, nature is waiting for you. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, September 22, 2013

Poem Edited: Monday, September 23, 2013


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