State all the causes
Why Earth so beautiful is.
Some went on and on,
Pages spilling with their pain,
A poet said: rain.
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Senryu |22.07.2019|
Rain is the cause of beautifying nature or anythings.This poem absolutely states this theme. Beautiful poem in brief. Thanks for sharing.
And good feedback also seems like good rains after a long wait. Thank you KM for the good words.
Chain and pain Stain and strain! Gain with love and life; Rain! ! ! ! ! Much needed on earth. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
Thanks Edward Louis, This poem was inspired by rains, very light one, and coming after a long wait here in Baroda. Yes, much needed on Earth, indeed. Mankind realizes its value only when monsoons become irregular, and rains scarce.
Typo.... Another.... Liked the title of this poem, too. A beautiful description of rain.
I thought, you wanted to say: a mother of all fascinating poems! ! ! But I will be happy still with one about 'good caption'. Thanks again.
Amother fascinating and clever poem. Yes, rain can make the earth beautiful. The last sentence is a surprise. The wonders of being a Poet, he can observe everything..
I am beginning to understand what kind of poems are liked. But my priority still will remain those I like first. Your feedback is always good to read, and meaningful as well. Thanks.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
A beautiful poem with a delicate rhythm sir! Loved reading this fabulous little poem.......10
I'm glad you noticed the rhythm as well. Thank you so much dear reader poet.