Rain, The Beautifier In Chief Poem by Aniruddha Pathak

Rain, The Beautifier In Chief

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State all the causes
Why Earth so beautiful is.
Some went on and on,
Pages spilling with their pain,
A poet said: rain.
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Senryu |22.07.2019|

Monday, July 29, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: beauty,poet,rain
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Dillip K Swain 31 July 2019

A beautiful poem with a delicate rhythm sir! Loved reading this fabulous little poem.......10

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Aniruddha Pathak 31 July 2019

I'm glad you noticed the rhythm as well. Thank you so much dear reader poet.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 29 July 2019

Rain is the cause of beautifying nature or anythings.This poem absolutely states this theme. Beautiful poem in brief. Thanks for sharing.

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Aniruddha Pathak 30 July 2019

And good feedback also seems like good rains after a long wait. Thank you KM for the good words.

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Edward Kofi Louis 29 July 2019

Chain and pain Stain and strain! Gain with love and life; Rain! ! ! ! ! Much needed on earth. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Aniruddha Pathak 30 July 2019

Thanks Edward Louis, This poem was inspired by rains, very light one, and coming after a long wait here in Baroda. Yes, much needed on Earth, indeed. Mankind realizes its value only when monsoons become irregular, and rains scarce.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 29 July 2019

Typo.... Another.... Liked the title of this poem, too. A beautiful description of rain.

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Aniruddha Pathak 30 July 2019

I thought, you wanted to say: a mother of all fascinating poems! ! ! But I will be happy still with one about 'good caption'. Thanks again.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 29 July 2019

Amother fascinating and clever poem. Yes, rain can make the earth beautiful. The last sentence is a surprise. The wonders of being a Poet, he can observe everything..

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Aniruddha Pathak 30 July 2019

I am beginning to understand what kind of poems are liked. But my priority still will remain those I like first. Your feedback is always good to read, and meaningful as well. Thanks.

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Aniruddha Pathak

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Godhra - Gujarat
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