Razors Edge _Infidelity Poem by T.James Becker

Razors Edge _Infidelity

Rating: 5.0


Like the pooling of the tides
Brutal waters advance and retreat
Surge of despair pulling you out
Out into murky abyss of pain
To be slammed once more onto the rocks
Jagged and sharp as words of goodbye
Sliced with the razor edge of infidelity

Battered and bruised a dying essence
Rattle of ones last breath escape blue lips
Life slipping through weak fingers
Eyes clouded, melted by words of anger
Images of what once was dance in shadows
Upon the sandy shores of the spirits ocean
Wearing gaily painted masks of unfaithfulness

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Viola Grey 31 January 2009

wow TJ...just like a razor, this slices so cleanly you don't feel the sting until later...fantastic poem

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Tom Balch 31 January 2009

Yes deep and meaningful, nice work,10 Tom

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Dream Catcher 31 January 2009

Gosh TJ, this is a deep powerful poem...great to see you back posting my friend, you've been deeply missed...top 10..*dc* x

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T.James Becker

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Prescott Arizona
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