Red Star Poem by Shelvakumari Thachayil

Red Star

Rating: 5.0


When the moon pass over the sun
The moment grasses whispered
The stars turn to seems red don't shine
Birds forgot to sing
Everything is wrong
Nothing going right
Tear stays in my eyes
What I am
Doesn't know how to die
Living like a doll
Controlling by UUUUUU only!

Red Star
Saturday, August 18, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: red
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Dillip K Swain 18 August 2018

Birds forgot to sing Everything is wrong Nothing going right Tear stays in my eyes.....lucid poetic expression! A beautiful poem! (10)

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Gajanan Mishra 18 August 2018

living like a doll, moon pass over the sun

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