Red Thread Poem by Little Red Apple

Red Thread



Betwixt us, Honey..
There's a red thread that bonds since that day
The very day we met each other for the first time
The time that I was sure I have met someone that will vary my life rhyme

Maybe I'm vulnerable
Need to be saved
Need to be protected
From anything sinister outside
But,
I'll always keep this precious thread
Try to make it be unbreakable

The read thread on our fingers
Will be stronger in every single day we pass
Never able to be broken by any things
By fight, shout, anger or even the torrential of tears

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Blue Eyes 08 March 2009

i am speechless before your extraordinary talent.

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Greenwolfe 1962 06 March 2009

As I understand it. The Red Thread is a symbol of undying love. This little piece describes this relationship between two people in love despite whatever problems they may encounter. There was very little rhythm or rhyme in this piece and that makes it a difficult thing to read smoothly. That would have made it more beautiful. But it is as it is. GW62

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