Reflection....! Poem by Devanshu Patel

Reflection....!

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Reflection...!

The pursuance of
pleasure in plenty leads to
its disappearance


In trying to make
the machines more like human
we've become machines


Phones are becoming
smarter nowadays leaving
their users dumb


People seem to take
more care of keeping healthy
their mobiles than mind

© Devanshu Patel
1/6/2019

Sunday, January 6, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: reflections
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Antony Theodore 25 March 2019

machines, phones, desire for plenty.in life. all these lead to destruction of inner peace and tranquility. so true dear Devanshu

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Kumarmani Mahakul 06 January 2019

Appearance to disappearance a journey is noted and well perceived. Phones are becoming smarter and humanoid machines are invented. An amazing thought provoking poem is beautifully penned.

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Dr Antony Theodore 06 January 2019

The modern Technology, how it is affecting us.......... it is a revolution from which there is no returning back....... only thing is that we have to ask our young ones to be careful with all that is modern.. i think so dear Devanshu. thank u for your reflections. tony

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Devanshu Patel

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Kapadwanj, Gujarat (India)
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