Refrigerant Morning Poem by Andy Brookes

Refrigerant Morning

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The refrigerator is empty, just a few rather stale veg stuck in a shady recess,
a metaphor, I think, for my empty and staid life, a mouldy morsel of cheese green and dry, like the jealousy I feel for lovers who walk in the park
walking hand in hand, stopping every now and then for a stray kiss.

my head is full of rusty nails which rattle against my skull
scratchy and dull.
the sky, which acts like a barometer for my feelings,
is steely and hard as if no plane or fist could punch a hole in it.
wanting to ventilate it so the sun might shaft through and thaw my emotions.

needing milk, eggs and bread, I write a list, at least I think, I can fill the refrigerator, my life however is another question.

Saturday, January 26, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: loneliness,love and life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rajnish Manga 26 January 2019

Random musings crafted beautifully. Perfect use of metaphor to express inner feelings of loss. Thanks. like the jealousy I feel for lovers who walk.... hand in hand stopping every now and then for a stray kiss. punch a hole (in the sky) ....so the sun might shaft through and thaw my emotions.

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