Remember Those Wasps We Used To Tease? Poem by Alien Zoo

Remember Those Wasps We Used To Tease?



Now, the wasp's hives
we threw sand at

Disgusted they are
towards us all

Stung me one day, over and over
Finally fallen, on the brinch of giving up

And I always thought that I was hard to shake
my foundation once were naturaly firm
But it was erosion slowly eating me from below

Just like my teeth, the carries were hard to spot in my soul
The number of them has grown at such large amount
that I'm starting to crumble

Now I am at a state wich is between sleep and soberty
How can you wake up, when you're already awake

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mae Bonnin 21 January 2010

This is wonderful poetry! I love the imagery you put in here and the metaphors too.

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