Remorse Poem by Vishal Sharma

Remorse

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Lifelong promise
where are they?
now...
in the arms of
the mighty time
or, somewhere else
I thought myself
the luckiest
you proved me
the useless
now life has no
connection, with me
as, I too
don't want to survive
WAIT...
knowing the ultimate truth
I, being relised
you were correct
nor was I
I lost a love in the
form of you
NOW...
tears share both of us
but that mighty line
can't be just overwheled
by that tears
sadly,
I lost you, hence I
lost my life

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Hazel Durham 29 June 2013

You lost your lover, so beautifully composed with great depth of feeling!

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Gajanan Mishra 29 June 2013

you are my love, good expression, thanks.

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