Responce Poem by Chrishtiana Reed
Responce
Hey, i read your poems they aight,
You got tallent, the words you say i can realate.
The way you feel is the exact way i been feeling for many years,
Its a miracle to see that there is someone out there that knows how i feel.
If you saw me and the way i act, you would know that i been lyin when you see me smilin.
People say she aight, but honestly i aint.
I try so hard to hide what i feelin inside cause if people knew how i felt they would be all ova me puttin me out.
I been fighting for many years just to keep from being put down/ out.
The time has come when im weak, to weak to fight anymore,
So here i say and here i type;
My life aint as good as it seems to look like...
Many people hide what they really feel. They try to hide their pain, they try to hide their loss. there are only a few of us who know how to hide our true feelings very well. Your poems are really good. Don't stop writing. I love your poems.
Hi.Of the greatest of my knowing, we poet are the worst to be offended.Ur poemz realy drive me crazy.
yeah all people act happy and you are not an exception..........your poem is good and full of emotions........i lyke it very much...........
I also like this poem of yours. What would happen if we DIDN'T put feelings in our poems?
At least you were being honest! Ilove it see that's why we poets write cause if we don't it might get ugly! Girl i'm digging this! -snaps fingers-
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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4/26/2024 4:18:53 PM # 1.0.0.1119
I just read this poem feelin. that I have the power to destroy anything just to live, , it's inspired me.. u're talkin. abt him just if he was ur only response for ur question what is life and for why i just live... perfect rated 10 :)