dim light of cloudy storm
strong winds swept
drumming sounds of rain
dancing boughs of trees
blossoms beaten down
waves of raindrops
surge past in air
against an earthen shore
upon the sodden floor
rain falls in inky skies
just like tears
in dark and sorrowed eyes
heartfelt winters warmth
melting over life
restoring what was quietly lost
in the heat that dried
the waters from the land
where life watched
in growing sunlit times.
Mellifluously crisp, and smooth structure....resplendent imagework...Solid Crafting, indeed, David! ~ FjR ~ ..2008..
Mellifluously crisp, and smooth structure....resplendent imagework...Solid Crafting, indeed, David! ~ FjR ~ ..2008..
A beautiful poem, David. I especially like the line 'heartfelt winters warmth.' Many think of winter mostly in negative terms, but in fact, all seasons have their positive aspects in restoration of the earth. Thanks, an excellent write, , , ,10, Best regards, Richard
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I would like to translate this poem
Nicely woven words washed perfect by your hand. Delightful read. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX