Rorschach Clouds Poem by Denis Mair

Rorschach Clouds

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--- ---before you read the poem, please look at the photo below, and see if the clouds remind you of anything.
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RORSCHACH clouds groping for form...

In the upper left quadrant there is a fluffy, pip-squeak pooch;
it's up on its hind legs yipping and yapping....

In the lower left quadrant is a slightly warty porpoise....

In the lower middle a saint is basking in beatitude; a cascade of Jacob's ladders are pouring over his head.

I think he's feeling the immaterial version of a warm glow...

The sun is trying out an extra fancy gold Lamé aura...

Rorschach Clouds
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
photo by Nico Vassilakis
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Susan Williams 13 July 2023

Thank you for sharing this delightful picture and opening the gates of our imagination

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Susan Williams 13 July 2023

I love your version of the story playing itself out in the clouds above! but I hold that I do not ride dogs but horses into heaven!

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Susan Williams 13 July 2023

the image in the clouds--- I see me riding away on my favorite horse and my cowboy boyfriend waiting for me to return--

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