Saint And His Faith Poem by mohd shujaath ali

Saint And His Faith

Rating: 4.3


While i am crossing a lake; i saw a saint: green rob, wearing turban on a head; elite face, sparking eyes and long beard: there was a black scorpion on a lake, its drown to die and suffering for life; saint saw concentrate, wished to save there were no stick near to lake and not a way to saved; he keeps his hand forward to saved, scorpion strink on his wrist, saint hand shaked scorpion fall again in a lake; twis and thies saint did again and again: I watched them from longtime, i asked to saint why did you try to save again and again once scorpion string no one goes near to it again; saint spread his lips with a little smile and says, my loyality is to saved him and his duty is to string me; if scorpion not change his attitude then how can i leave my faith:

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
This story i wrote to show the priority of saint and their faith its a lesson for every human being to build a faith on creature and creator
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ramesh Rai 30 June 2015

This one is too beautiful with simplicity conveying a thought provoking. message. you have expressed your deep inner feeling with simple words so that every one can understand. I must like to congratulate you for having such beautiful thought. I like to add this poem in my list. Thanks for sharing and + 10.

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Arfa Iris 26 June 2015

Wow! Amazing!! 10/10 Thank u

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Arfa Iris 26 June 2015

Wow!! Amazing.. 10/10

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mohd shujaath ali

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mahbubnager, INDIA
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