Secret Lake Poem by Barry Middleton

Secret Lake

Rating: 5.0


I cast my dreams into a secret lake,
far up the valley path and hid from view.
And there must rest what time cannot forsake,
beneath a veil of vague deceptive blue.

Although unknown by strangers passing by,
this hiding place was all I might contrive.
Beneath the crystal waters yet they lie,
but no one knows, my dreams are still alive.

For memory frees a long lost love affair,
in haunted places like a mountain glen.
I smile and lift myself above all care,
as I recall the times together then.

But no one sees the sorrows buried there,
nor pain and loss my mask forever seals.
For there are secrets much too hard to share,
like places in the heart that time conceals.

Secret Lake
Wednesday, April 19, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: love and loss,secret
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 19 April 2017

Valley path is so far and this is hid from view. Casting dreams in to the secret lake not only amazes mind but also mesmerizes us. Memory frees a long lost love affair but dreams are still alive. This is very thoughtful poem shared with great imagery....10

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Barry Middleton 19 April 2017

Thank you. I took more care with this one as I do when a poem is developing well. I like it too.

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