Senryu - 114 Magical Moments Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Senryu - 114 Magical Moments

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Magical moments
snowflake, as fragile as life
melting in our hearts

Thursday, February 11, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: life,nature
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Edward Kofi Louis 13 February 2016

Tender with the works of nature. Nice piece of work.

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Nosheen Irfan 11 February 2016

So true Asim. Magical moments are like snowflakes melting in our hearts. And the simile, as fragile as life...awesome.

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Mohammad Ahmadizadeh 11 February 2016

A perfect haiku shows lovely moments in our life. Nice penned.

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