Senryu - 35 (Our Relations) Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Senryu - 35 (Our Relations)

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Your words, my silence
geometric parallels,
inseparable.

Wednesday, October 7, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: love,relationship
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rajnish Manga 07 October 2015

Great poem. You have mastered the art of essaying a subject with the minimum of linguistic help. Thanks.

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M Asim Nehal 08 October 2015

Thanks much Shri Rajnishji.

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Kelly Kurt 07 October 2015

The roles in a relationship are interesting. Some are listeners, some need to talk. They fit well.

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M Asim Nehal 08 October 2015

Thanks much, Sir

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