Senryu - Trap Of Love Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Senryu - Trap Of Love

Rating: 5.0


free me from your clasp
love you have beautiful traps
let live peacefully

Friday, October 23, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: love,love and dreams,release
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
* Sunprincess * 23 October 2020

Trap of love is unbreakable so never get trapped nor try to cone out.

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Poetic Sky 23 October 2020

To live peacefully is what everyone looks for but life tests with everything.

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Deepak S S 23 October 2020

No one has escaped from the claws of love a futile try. No peaceful life.5

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Darren Jkoeryo 23 October 2020

I am wondering now how you keep thinking about love so deeply.

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S H 23 October 2020

Don't release your clasp I like your beautiful traps Satisfy my life.. how about this one.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 12 January 2022

Lovely poem.....top score! !

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Anjandev Roy 26 October 2020

Let live peacefully.......brilliant.......thank u....anjandev roy.

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Gordon Walter 24 October 2020

free me from your clasp..........A wishful thinking love you have beautiful traps...Attraction let live peacefully......................Dreams

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Suzon Albert 24 October 2020

No one can escape it.

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Aarzoo Mehek 24 October 2020

Hahahaha once trapped there is no escape. No pleading works. Just surrender. Nice senryu.5***

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