Senses On Overdrive Poem by Patricia Fritsche

Senses On Overdrive



i.



Obsidian night

slippers tread lightly on

orb returning cycle in line

dreams craving casting fate

obscure canals seen channel feelings



ii.



mimic sullen moods in mix

making headway's gain

playing into doubt's game, though,

straight ahead, or not...



iii.



getting through quick sand

lost thoughts tumbling in confusion

bellying up

effort extends stronger hands, now...



iv.



hope hearing tired beats echoing softly

ticking away

valuable seconds away

faith meets

her calling que before all trust ends.



v.



Yet. the moon stays peaceful

and unrestrained

until the morning sun tends to its flock,

still overwhelmed by it all.

Senses On Overdrive
Sunday, March 10, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: nature
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chinedu Dike 11 March 2019

Well conceived and nicely brought forth with clarity of thought and mind. An insightful creation. Thanks for sharing Patricia.

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Patricia Fritsche 13 March 2019

Thank you!

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