Set Me Apart Poem by Sandra Osborne

Set Me Apart

Rating: 2.8


Sharing vices
With friends I love,
Sets me apart,
From the multitudes,
Who fear the use of Freedom,

A hollow haven.
Broad bleak avenues,
Shinning cars,
Glitter and lace,
Neon and McDonalds.

I have traveled far,
From home,
In these journeys,
And yet always,
I am home.

Sharing love
With friends I love,
Sets me apart
from the mundane gray;
And sparks fire
Inside my soul.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kelly Allen Vinal 11 December 2004

Interesting concept, the sharing of vice... Not bad!

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Herbert Nehrlich1 10 December 2004

I think this ought to be expanded, it stops abruptly leaving the reader wondering what happened. Good though H

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