Shattered Poem by Cheryl Tutaan

Shattered

Rating: 4.7


Deeps and hollows
Shattered emotions free;
Where am I?
Lost in the middle of the ocean...
Vanquished of the nightmares
Hurdled up in my bed;
Finding consequences
Stuck through my senses
I hate this, I hate myself
Winning out the battle,
Between mind, love and hatred...
Come to me my spirit, live within ecstasy,
Stay away of the devil, who just ripped my soul...

Sweetlyrehc©

Shattered
Sunday, April 30, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: broken,depression,hatred,sadness
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bernard F. Asuncion 30 April 2017

So sad, CHE.......... a perfect 10......

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Cheryl Tutaan 11 May 2017

Thank you so much, Bernard... yeah, a poignant impression of that verse, but a total euphoria with your comment and vote! 😊

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Jazib Kamalvi 01 May 2017

What a poetic line! Stay away of the devil, who just ripped my soul. Thanks for sharing here.

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Cheryl Tutaan 06 May 2017

Touched by your words, Jazib...Thank you once again... :)

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Siddartha Montik 11 May 2017

Wonderful! Sure we are shattered when we hate ourselves. how nicely expressed in ever verse! ! Thank you Poet! 10++++!

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Bernard F. Asuncion 24 August 2019

The words and flow are perfectly arranged......

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Bernard F. Asuncion 23 August 2019

The deep emotion is felt inside....

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Bernard F. Asuncion 10 August 2019

This composition is excellently written......

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Bernard F. Asuncion 01 July 2019

It conveys the courage to fight the dark........

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Bernard F. Asuncion 30 June 2019

It is very well inked, dear Cheryl..........

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