She Poem by Alfred Ramos

She

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She made me do it
She made me move it
She teased and dangled
She squeezed me till I strangled
She led me on
She the Queen, I the pawn
What a wicked web she wove
Into darkness I sadly dove
She, that shameless Black Widow
Took all my dough, even stole my shadow

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kesav Easwaran 01 April 2009

nice work, Alfred...the bitterness is perfect in the concluding line...thanks...10

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Reshma Ramesh 31 March 2009

haha! ! so like everyone u fell too....huh! ! too bad.......well penned

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Alfred Ramos

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