She Said, He Said Poem by Susan Lacovara
She Said, He Said
She tried,
He lied...
She wept,
He slept...
She cared,
He stared...
She dreamed,
He schemed...
She hoped,
He coped...
She lended
He ended...
She waited,
He dated...
She wondered,
He wandered...
She struggled,
He smuggled...
She lacked,
He packed...
She reflected,
He neglected...
She worried,
He scurried...
And so it ends...She said, He said....
A beautiful rhythm... reminiscent of a haiku in the aspect of the lovers' juxtaposition... the simplicity is sensational... very refreshing! Well penned!
Wow, this was just..amazing. Thanks for all the love on my poetry and you can bet I'll definitely be looking more into yours. Great job
This is a creative way to tell between two lovers that play contrast interest...a very good idea to me! _Soul
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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5/4/2024 8:24:51 PM # 1.0.0.1119
This morning I was going through some of your earlier poems and this simple one caught my eyes. The parting ways of the two lovers have been portrayed simplistically here. The note adds the final words. Beautifully written! 10/10.