Brandon Brooks

Rookie (may 12 1993)

She Said No - Poem by Brandon Brooks

remember the pain
of my soul crumbling away
after she said those words to me
it was like the world starting to fray

i felt like stopping the beat of my heart,
the rythm of my breathing,
but there was something, a part
that said no to my surrender

i tried agian, but still the same answer
she evaded me, but infected me
like a deadly cancer
only i obtained this disease and nobody else did

agian i tried, but she still said no
still she denied me
she cut me down, but i still grow
and i will try, but she will still say no

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, May 1, 2008

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