Fatima Obaid

Rookie - 446 Points (19 Dec / Rawalpindi)

She Was The Hunger Of Luv - Poem by Fatima Obaid

Whenever she looked up and down
she found nothing except tears of pound
she just needed love
she just wanted to love
she had no fear of life
she had just tears in life
she broke her wishes again and again
she broke her emotions again and again
no one loves her
no one care her
she walked all the nights in the search of love
BUT! she found nothing except tears of ponds


Comments about She Was The Hunger Of Luv by Fatima Obaid

  • Silver Star - 3,830 Points S.zaynub Kamoonpuri (12/23/2013 1:00:00 AM)

    A nice and lovely poem, sad to read... Pls do coment my latest poem too. (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 152 Points Muhammad Ali (12/21/2013 12:37:00 AM)

    very emotional poem. Allah is the well wisher and the Great Judge. Here or there, she will have a love filled heart and life.
    Love and peace sister. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, October 24, 2013

Poem Edited: Thursday, October 24, 2013


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