Shot Poem by Twisted Rose

Shot



Shot

Just
One more
Shot.
Then,
I promise
I’ll stop

It helps me
Focus….
Is one
Of the
Many
Lies I tell,
Because
I want
One
More
Shot

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Silence Dogood 09 April 2009

It's okay but it sounds more like your just repeating the same line

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