Should I Quit? Poem by Travis Johnson

Should I Quit?



I’ve been writin for years
When will it end?
And lately
I got one question in my head
Should I quit?
Or keep writin these lines
8 years
Man that’s a long time
Will I be missed?
Or treated like another guy
But if I quit
Will that be wise?
I really need someone
To help me in what to do
Cause my mind is not focus
And I don’t have a clue
Is my words one of a kind
Straight from the heart
Or should they be deleted
And originals torn apart
This is the truth
This is somethin I feel
Heart filled with sorrow
Mind full of hatred fuel
This is my outlet
How I clear my mind
But if there’s no comments
Then I’m out of time
So do I quit?
Or do I stay
Tell me the truth
Cause it wouldn’t hurt me either way

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Well I already told u, u shudnt quit and I told u y....of course you'll be missed cuz ur good...really good, and if no one else thinks so at least u r in my eyes. So if any thing keep writing 4 me..lol..I really do love the things u right about tho bcuz their tru and real and I can really relate, (from a girls point of view of course.) Hope 2 see anuther poem =) . Dimplzz

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Charlene Antersijn 21 June 2009

As a friend I recommend u dont quit As a poemcritic I advise u never ever quit Quitters dont ever achieve their goals Winners dont never ever quit And u are not a quitter U are a Winner

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