noha el3wdy

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Sins Of Man Kind - Poem by noha el3wdy

Dear friend
May I,
According to your letter
It's my turn to reply;

Life isn’t sparkling with glitter
Or moving towards what's better
It's plagued with all sorts of evil;
People went crazy
Incest became easy
Morals disintegrated
Sins tolerated
Even happy days immigrated.

Some say it’s a curse
To terminate peace on earth
But it’s the words of our own verse
It's like we became the devil
Farewell to earthly heaven
Farewell to peace of mind
Farewell to people would mind
Welcome an end signed

Sins of all man kind.


Comments about Sins Of Man Kind by noha el3wdy

  • Gold Star - 44,557 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/21/2009 12:37:00 AM)

    Farewell to earthly heaven
    Farewell to peace of mind
    Farewell to people would mind
    Welcome an end signed

    Sins of all man kind...... beautiful write with long vision and forsight...10

    read mine I am disgrace andwwhat the hell m onearth? comment (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Lionel Dubos (6/7/2009 8:14:00 PM)

    voted: 9. Thy poem put me perplexe. I didn't really understand the first part of thur poem but something in the second part bother me. you talk about the devil in telling that we are became him. However, in telling this word 'devil' means that you believe in his existance and in the existance of an other god... The word bother me too because you said in the first part, in result, than all things which are good are bad and vice versa. So the 'devil' hasn't any existings....Well if you can explain me this part better it will be great. Thanks. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 5 Points _____________________________________ - (6/2/2009 11:49:00 PM)

    even anger can be so enchanting good work Noha.... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 87 Points Kesav Easwaran (6/2/2009 12:49:00 AM)

    Nice poem Noha...bit of anger rashness inside? be what ever there, you express your thoughts convey your message very poetically in this write...thanks...congrats...10 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Maya Hershey (5/30/2009 4:22:00 AM)

    nice poem, i give you 10++ first for the great diction... and second for the way you managed to describe the sins of mankind.... great poem (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Mustafa Ghuneim (5/28/2009 7:40:00 PM)

    This is absolutely beautiful... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 152 Points Muhammad Ali (5/28/2009 8:49:00 AM)

    A HELL....... you have described! ! and it is true. i felt the power in these lines
    10.. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Scott Austin (5/28/2009 1:30:00 AM)

    You speak with wisdom with these words you have expressed in this write. The sin of all mankind rages wars that affect us all as humans, may we all learn to respect one another for our differences and begin to more tolerance toward each other as well. Thank you for sharing your thoughts with us.

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  • Rookie - 0 Points Ben Gieske (5/26/2009 1:49:00 PM)

    Some say it’s a curse
    To terminate peace on earth
    But it’s the words of our own verse

    These words are especially poignant. Why don't we live up to our words so often spoken? (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, May 25, 2009

Poem Edited: Wednesday, May 27, 2009


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