Knees all soft and baggy
Skin all warm and clamy
with eyes half open
legs like concrete
shoes still on feet
to the hallway
where we meet
In our slept in clothes
Nicely written. Hope you don't mind but as I was reading it I couldn't help saying 'where we meet... in our clothes we sleep.'
like the poem, you got a way of writing words like pictures, meaning i can see the point very well.........................
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Great use of rhyme again... such a natural flow... I love this.. very visual! I think this is my favourate!