Slow Sailers Poem by Rod M.Peters

Slow Sailers

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I've not been haunted, like you,
By eerily glowing dragonflies
The size of young doves
Stopping you cold on your feet
In the narrow meadow-lanes,
Their luminescent eyes staring at you
With the urgency of those tasked
To convey unutterable secrets.

Nor by the trampling of powerful hooves
Echoing menacingly ever closer
Through the moonlit forest
Putting your faithful dogs on the run,
Leaving you alone to face but
A strangely scented mist
Whose cold arms embrace you for a moment
But just as soon leave you
To catch a glimpse of a gossamer Moon
Through frozen branches.

But I've been haunted
Night after night,
Season after season,
By the Slow Sailers of the western skies
Tracing their course through
Well-worn celestial paths,
Appearing like clockwork
With the last glow of the sinking orb,
At times dimming down to mere specks of light,
But then puffing up to blinding beacons,
Though I only half believe they are,
As the old mountain-folk claim,
The ‘lights of the dead'.

Wednesday, September 20, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: legends,lights
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
(Inspired by true events my wife and I have witnessed in our mountain cabin)
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bri Edwards 21 September 2017

it's a beaut! bri ;)

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Rod Mendieta 22 September 2017

Forgot to say your suggestion below is quite right, only I didn't like two contiguous lines starting with 'with'. I'll see if I can come up with another alternative.

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Bri Edwards 21 September 2017

With luminescent eyes staring at you In the urgency of those tasked ................maybe it is 'just me', but i'd use With also in place of In. favorite lines so far (of many) : Leaving you to face but A strangely scented mist Whose cold arms embrace you for a moment but are you SURE you and your wife were done with the bottle before making your mountain-cabin sightings? ? ! Yup! Lights of the Dead they are. i thought everybody knew THAT! ! ? TO mYpOEMlIST. bri ;)

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Rod Mendieta 22 September 2017

Thank you Bri. 'Done with the bottle'? , you ask, well... er... perhaps not. Always sipping a little wine now and then. But it was also the dogs who got spooked, remember, and they hardly ever touch the stuff!

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Kumarmani Mahakul 20 September 2017

Slow Sailers of the western skies are tracing their course through well-worn celestial paths time to time by season and from season to season by perception night after night. Amazing drafting is shared here really.10

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Rod Mendieta 21 September 2017

Much obliged, Kumarmani. Inspired by actual sightings, but really, just an attempt to recapture a the sense of awe and wonder.

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Rod M.Peters

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San José, Costa Rica
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