So Close To Paradise! ! ! Poem by Compton Wright

So Close To Paradise! ! !

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I am so close to paradise
It like when I moved into a different school
I am scared out my mind until I met my angel
She touch me with her voice and it seems we were lovers already.
When I gave her my kindness
She took it like a invitation
I love her smile, love her hair, and everything about her
all feels like paradise
When she hold me, when she kiss me
Its like millions and millions of angels
blessing me on my lips
And on my body
It only one problem it is me
She is perfect! ! !
In every single aspect
As for me I am the diamond in the mines
that isn't been found
I love her in many, many, ways
And she makes all my troubles gone in a instant
And that when I see an open path to paradise

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Arabian Heart 12 June 2008

this poem so true that takes me away that makes me breath so hard more i want more of this paradise you speak of

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Brittany Thomas 10 June 2008

your poem is so real and beautiful...i like it..real touching

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