unique the flowers to contradict
but bower to spread the fragrance and predict
sobriety the power to reveal the inner beauty
but long lasting effect is the pretty
like strings of lute stands alone
but quiver to give the same music to clone
love is the ocean of depth to find and bind
but souls are on the shores of sands never to mind
as pillars of temple stands apart to fathom
but shower to give the divinity of sanctum
coldness of heart in the winter sway
but to whisper the breeze in splinter way.
Hi Saraswathy, A beautiful poem revealing the importance of maintaining sobriety in one's life, expressed in matching imagery from nature, the bower with fragrance of life the nature offers. strings of lute stand alone, quiver to give the same music to clone.... love is the ocean of depth to find and bind but souls are on the shores of sands.... pillars of temple stands apart to fathom but shower to give the divinity of sanctum Loved reading the poem. Congrats for penning this one. Thank you for sharing.10++
thanks a million, my gratitude for your great reviews, welcome sir.
To reveal the inner beauty! ! Nice piece of work. Thanks for sharing.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
sobriety the power to reveal the inner beauty but long lasting effect is the pretty....... every couple of lines is quotable...... very philosophical...images are high in quality....rhymes ate smooth and sweet sounding.... thanks.