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Godhra - Gujarat

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Life, you not with me seems as empty
As a super market shelf can be,
It's bad being lonely,
But pity's what kills me,
Now one day emptiness
Wish, comes to me to bless,
That, I live minus your pity-clad sympathy.
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Tongue-in-cheek |10.07.2020|
Topic: life, loneliness, sympathy, pity

Aniruddha Pathak

Friday, July 31, 2020

Topic(s) of this poem: life,loneliness,pity,sympathy

poem poems sympathy Loneliness Emptiness empty lonely

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 01 August 2020

I concur with the insightful thoughts of the great Poet in this wonderful limerick. Yes, we don't want pity. We are reduced to being unable to sway with life. Emptiness and loneliness are like waves in the ocean, they are so fleeting. Liked the opening lines. Great poetic expression.

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