Some Shapes Of Octagon-I Poem by Sadiqullah Khan

Some Shapes Of Octagon-I



I had been looking, in the steamiest of the corners,
The multicolored glass windows. Some shapes of octagon.
In mud walls. Pulling a ram into the dusty street. There were three,
Youths. That was the shanzelize of the village. Their knees were
Rubbing against the mud; and like a camel would sit, before it gets up.
A white dog was following us. A hallow of a shadow wanting to hide,
From the moon that was just on tenth of the month. The wall was standing.
In the air. The shop, lit by a lantern was selling candies. This was neither good,
Nor bad. It was three thousand years ago. And it is now. They were grown.
Learned. Contented. With honest smiles. It is said, 'They do not possess evil eye'
The earth and the skies have always been generous. This youthful innocence, Buddha said,
Had been his vision of nibhana. He had a vision of himself in a lap under a tree.
The shape of the octagon is setting into some illusions. Moving like a celestial alien object.
On a magician's finger. When visited by a lotus, can you guess what it would add?
It was moving and revolving. There are more dreams to come.

On a visit to village Korai, Dera Ismail Khan; late in the evening.

Sadiqullah Khan
Peshawar
November 3,2012

Friday, December 14, 2012
Topic(s) of this poem: love and art
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Village II by Chetan Katigar, India.



1. This is a whole event. Octagon is actually a symbol, having mystic significance. This shape has been used in buildings with multicolored glass as window panes. In mud walls, meaning that the urbanity was being sought in mud walls. The scene is a small village, the time is pulling a ram on tenth of the moon is a festival.
2. The three youths are young boys and the street is compared to shanzelize street in Paris, a contrast.
The rest are surrealist images.
3.'This was neither good nor bad' is a commentary. The whole event was three thousand years ago, which means that it was just like three thousand years ago. Life has not changed in three thousand years.
4. The simplicity of the people is explained. Buddha is introduced because, the 'nibhana' that Buddha wanted to achieve was rooted in a childhood vision of the Buddha, when he was in the lap of a lady under a tree.
5. The shapes of octagon is making shapes is subject to any interpretation. This is to bridge the reality, whether we call it magic realism or augmented reality or whatever.
6. Thanks Jackie Allen for giving me an opportunity to explain what I have written.
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