Sour Relations ~ Poem by Poetic Sky

Sour Relations ~

Rating: ★5.0


I wanted him beside
All days and all nights
Like the sun comes by
Like the moon goes by
But his excuses fluttered
His commitment never muttered
And I always suffered
The lost love evaporated now
I look it up in the sky
Floating clouds, whispering wind
All enjoy yet I suffer.

Poetic Sky
Friday, October 15, 2021
Topic(s) of this poem: lost love
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Anjandev Roy 06 July 2023

Fantastic write....thanks for sharing....

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M Asim Nehal 16 October 2021

Truth of this life, nicely expressed. Full Stars

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