Spaceship One Poem by Jan Oskar Hansen

Spaceship One



Spaceship 1

Wonderful night stars so close took a step ladder up to
the roof terrace and picked one it shone so bright, put
It on the mantelpiece where it slowly faded into a blob
like a balloon thrown out of a passing car and run over
hundred times. Tried to put it back but the heaven was
too far away, but I saw the hole in the velvety carpet.

Threw the damp blob into the rubbish bin in the yard,
next day the bin was gone so I drove into town, bought
a new one. The following night was wonderful too but
stars kept well away from my grasping hands, my star
was now back in its place; in the morning I had two bins
one looked slightly frizzled at the edges.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Linda Ori 13 January 2010

Which proves you just can't keep a good star down! Interesting concept - light and airy piece of reading - well done! (Perhaps it would be easier to read with correct punctuation, rather than run -on sentencing, however) .

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