Still Fallen Poem by Sanjukta Nag

Still Fallen

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You sculpted a couple of mountains
On the north of our bed,
And invoke the sun
To ascend behind them,
For sprinkling golden rays of holiness
On our entangled limbs,
Which are still wrapped by the
Sinful shroud of midnight.
He rises; our souls also rise with him,
But bodies remain fallen
Knowing that no sun can elevate us
To the luminous field of lost Eden.

Sunday, November 8, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: eden,love and life,relationship,sin
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
M Asim Nehal 08 November 2015

Awesome poem, relationship well explored. Nothing can bring the peace except we is the ultimate message.....Loved it.

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Loke Kok Yee 08 November 2015

naughty naughty but worth it thanks-10

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Vishal Sharma 08 November 2015

lovely this poetry is simply classic

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Kelly Kurt 08 November 2015

A beautifully worded poem, Sanjukta

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Seema Jayaraman 08 November 2015

Lovely imagery..the call of wakening sun and yet the soul lost in midnights eden..thanks for sharing

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