Strawberrys And Chocolate Poem by Tammie LilAimo

Strawberrys And Chocolate

Rating: 4.5


Strawberrys and Chocolate are so romantic,
my love for you; I'd cross the atlantic.
Strawberrys and chocolate are ever so sweet,
when im with you my heart always skips a beat.
Strawberrys and chocolate there taste makes me come alive,
your a drug and for you i thrive.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sandy Player 24 December 2012

Interesting choice of vocab. Makes love seem dangerous, animal and ecstatic. And as cross the Atlantic is seen as old fashioned these days, it seems sublty cheeky/play-mocking/provocative too. Nice ideas for a few lines!

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