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Mustafa Ghuneim

(31/7/1991 / Egypt)

Stupid Angel

This angel story is very new,
It was never told for you to know,

An angel like others, have charm and powers,
Sent from skies to guard, to guide,
But she herself needed guidness,
Her first mission but it's Okay,
She will learn by time, as they say,

And then comes the devil's role,
Tries to mislead the Angel off the course,
With all his powers and all his force,
The Angel's confusion made everything to her 'cool',
The Devil succeeded after-all,

The angelic silk the angel wore was torn,
The angel fell in void of sins,
And a devil from the angel was born,
It's the fault of misleading..
Stupid angel she was, beginner in a world of monsters,

She was there beyond the skies,
And then she was sent to the earth,
When she fell in her own abyss,
The devil's lies misleaded her,
and in the no-where, she dies;

Lies can make you what you want,
That's the oldest trick of all,
Not because he called her my beloved,
Means the love was her enough,
What a stupid word to a lil angel can be said,
How can a devil feel love?

Submitted: Tuesday, May 19, 2009
Edited: Friday, May 22, 2009
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  • Noha El3wdy (5/21/2009 11:58:00 AM)

    the title is really interesting, the idea also. but she isnt a stupid angle its unfair to call her so she is just innocent, new in the game of life.....
    i really liked it, keep up the good work (Report) Reply

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