Subtle Poem by Jordan Salinas

Subtle



The birds fly,
south of these lands.
Foolish to think such things.
A crayon does speak my mind,
and a pencil does see my suit.

In all due time,
or in hot pursuit.
We will entise those that arive,
and those that fall through.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Aylissa Ramirez 29 April 2009

crayons speak my mind also but not in the way they speak yours :) very nice poem.

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Jordan Crider 17 April 2009

wow dude, deep... i understand though, A crayon does speak my mind, and a pencil does see my suit my favorite line. i understand how your mind is in your art with your crayons, and not with the humdrum pencil life of all school offers. good job!

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