Suicide Note Poem by Silence Dogood

Suicide Note

Rating: 5.0


While you copy what the teacher wrote.
Im busy writting my suiside note.
With my hidden tears and secret smiles.
Boy when I see you it takes me, miles
With my pen in hand writting my last line.
Famous last words and my name i sighn.
Writting the P.S to tell you I care.
Wishing only that you could be there.
For when I hang that rope on my head.
Praying that soon I would be dead.
Too bad I had to end my story.
Before you got to say your sorry.
But its too late to turn back now.
Even if i could I dont know how.
But before I could finish my suiside note.
You looked over your shoulder and saw what i wrote.
You put your hand on my arm and whispered words.
I crumpeled the note for ' sorry' I heard
You told me then three simple things I love you.
After that I didnt need the note.
Or hang my head in a suiside rope.
Because to me there were only two things.
First was you.
And second was me

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Arianne Owens 09 July 2011

that was, deep. your an awesome writer.

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Lexy M. 11 January 2011

luved it had me on my toes worndering wats next i would read more if yuhh promise to write more ;)

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Hayley Wilkinson 23 December 2008

wow, mate deep.........

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