Scarlet flames the sunset in the early autumn twilight,
like a canopy of fire streaked with gold'
I sit gazing at this beautiful, awe inspiring sight,
as so many have before me, in days of eons old
The breeze upon my cheek, as a womans soothing hand,
so light the gentle fingers, such a lovers soft caress,
playing melodies, to barren trees, in this autumn golden land,
and stills the sounds of night, into thoughts of lonliness...
extraordinary write.... delicious fuse of colors...... outstanding imagination! ! ! ! !
playing melodies, to barren trees, in this autumn golden land, and stills the sounds of night, into thoughts of lonliness... Memorable lines in a beautiful poem with fetching images of Sunset...10
Your beautiful and colourful images of an Autumn sunset fuse with human nature to create something spiritual - a well crafted and poignant poem. 'playing melodies to barren trees' is a truly magnificent line! S :)
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
a golden sunset is the most beautiful and you have captured its magnificence... i echo Susan and Sandra.... regarding those beautiful lines.....