Sweet Valentine (Senryu) Poem by Tia Attwood

Sweet Valentine (Senryu)



sweet valentine
forever bond through marriage
eternal life sentence

Sunday, February 14, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: love,poems,senryu
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
17 syllable senryu not done in the most common format of 5'7'5 but 4'7'6 format.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Terry Craddock 18 February 2016

nice, I liked the contrast between 'forever bond through marriage' and 'eternal life sentence' for some reason I keep thinking over your lines, different contrasts, the differences in nuances in arrangements

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