Swim Baby Swim Poem by Miroslava Odalovic

Swim Baby Swim

Rating: 3.5


Swim baby swim through the waters blue
It’s the first thing a human can do
Swim honey swim the beauty surface strokes
Swim the deepest bottom glow
Swim the exists of the drop
Swim the serpent river curves
Swim the stillness of the lake
Swim the murmurs of the springs

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Terence Craddock 27 October 2023

Long ago I wrote the poem 'Breath Short Contractions Impelling', dedicated to the poet Miroslava Odalovic; inspired by a single potential among many possible facets in this poem.

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Terence Craddock 27 October 2023

I always found this poem beautiful, the title interesting encourages, the first four lines are beautiful appealing, the next two lines crystal mystic intriguing, the last two lines contrast universal moments in mystery water. Sometimes we must swim.

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