Tanka ~ Fall Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Tanka ~ Fall

Rating: 5.0


bowed down to the ground
shadow of the tallest tree
fall of false pride-
a resting place for the monks
under the azure clear sky

Monday, November 1, 2021
Topic(s) of this poem: pride,philosophical
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rebecca Navarre 03 November 2021

Another very heart moving poem! .. With much wisdom and sorrow in this! .. Excellently expressed! .. Definite 5 Stars! ..+++++

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Shreya Hacks 01 November 2021

Marvellous poem, It has everything.

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