(05-29-91 + still living / Wake County, NC)

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“Tell me what’s on your mind”

I remember when I first met you
I had nothing to say
And now that I look at you
It seems like a play

You ask questions that don’t matter
Like you have a concussion
It sometimes makes me madder
And make me want to question

Question you on how you feel
Feel about this relationship
No answer makes an incomplete deal
It’s starting to look like a friendship

That’s not good
Seems like we’ll break up
You’re taking me towards a bad mood
Why can’t you just empty the cup

So we can go on
You always have am excuse
Doubts are flickering off and on
Looking like two dunces

Incompletion of what’s important
You’re afraid to be seen with me
If we’re important
You’ll let us be

Take what I say into consideration
‘Cause I can’t stand on my own
Where’s the acceleration
You might as well be alone

You don’t want me as I want you
Don’t think I’m a fool
My condition isn’t being cool
‘Cause I can play a fool

I don’t want to mess this up
So, I keep my eye on you and me
You’re going to get stuck
‘Cause you can’t see

I’ll take the time to call
But you want even answer me
Wondering if you want to do anything at all
Wondering if you’re going to talk to me

I really don’t understand
Understand who you are
So, why can’t you take a stand
And explain to me, who you are

I need to know you
And you need to know me
Words out your mouth must be true
For the start, give your name to me.

Submitted: Thursday, March 20, 2008


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  • Keyra King (10/3/2008 7:58:00 AM)

    i like this ths is good

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