Temptation Calls Poem by Jayne Louise Davies

Temptation Calls

Rating: 4.5


Don't tempt me with those lovely bakes,
Those apple tarts and nice cream cakes,
I'm on a diet,
For goodness sake!
They look so darn inviting.
I need to get in shape again,
How long it takes,
I don't know when,
I hope I don't give in by then,
I must stick to this diet.

Jayne Louise Davies

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jayne Louise Davies 19 August 2022

Thanks everyone x I really appreciate your comments x

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Anjandev Roy 19 August 2022

Great write.....thanks for sharing....

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 17 August 2022

Excellent Write Jayne I feel yr temptation

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 17 August 2022

So many of us could relate to this wonderful poem. Well expressed and so rightly said.

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Jayne Louise Davies

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Abercynon, Rhondda Cynon Taff
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