The Blade She Tightly Grips... Poem by Silentpoet Grl
The Blade She Tightly Grips...
running till she was gasping for air
she falls down, crumpling to her knees
crying out in only silent painful screams
from piled up hurt throughout her broken life
her whole body is shaking with intense pain
like a dagger that is cutting through her heart,
and every bone being crushed, breaking apart.
her wounded spirit is shattered, abandoned,
tossed to the road to be carelessly trampled on
everything is willing her to stay knocked down
her world is completely crashing all around
hanging her head, she feels immense shame
with everything urging her so deeply inside
enticing her to give up, and to believe the lies
opening her clenched hand, blood drips
from the blade she already tightly grips...
Emotion, temptation! is what i can see in this lovely poem. first hand every understandable and realteable :) nice write keep it up: ] ~Bella
get up, and walk... you are strong, and gifted. good poetry!
Truly a beauty you have written here, every word you used was perfect. 'enticing her to give up, and to believe the lies opening her clenched hand, blood drips from the blade she already tightly grips... ' To good, my friend, to good....! ;)
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I would like to translate this poem
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5/1/2024 5:55:47 AM # 1.0.0.1119
I understand this poems emotions and I think that you are a great writer. Keep it up.